L123_IES013_Think of a person in your family that is the most similar to you. 【Tambaboon English IELTs Lab Sydney Australia】

* My family is a typical family in Japan.


There are grandparents, parents, a brother and I in my family.

1. There are grandparents, parents, a brother and me 
2. in my family.

* I look just like my father.
* Medium build, pointed nose and dense black hair.

* My father is very kind and easy going.
* His love is the most selfless love.

I am luck enough because I have a good father.

1. I am lucky 
2. because I have a good father.

My father has been specially thirsty for knowledge as he had only a few years of schooling himself.

1. My father is especially thirsty for knowledge 
2. as he had only a few years of schooling himself.

He believe that knowledge can change fate.

1. He believes 
2. that knowledge can change fate.

So, my father offer more opportunity for me to study

1. So, 
2. my father offers more opportunities for me to study

* (no matter how poor my family was)

To sum up, my family is harmony and our life is very happy.

1. To sum up, 
2. my family is harmonious (you need the adjective here, harmony is a noun) and 
3. our life is very happy.

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