L057_DJQ022_Do you smoke? 【Tambaboon English IELTs study Lab Sydney Australia】 アイエルツ 英語

* I used to smoke in Japan.

However I quit smoking about several years ago.

1. However I quit smoking several years ago.

The biggest reason that I quit it is its cost.

1. The main reason that I quit was the cost.
2. The main reason why I quit was because of the cost.

In Australia, the price of cigaretto is around 20 Australian dollars.

1. In Australia, 
2. the price of cigarettes is around 20 Australian dollars.

* Compared to that, it is around 10 dollars in Japan.


The size is same but we have to pay 2 times cost.

1. The size is same but we have to pay twice the cost.
2. The number of cigarettes per packet is the same,
3. but we have to pay twice the  price.

I felt it is waste of money.

1. I felt it was a waste of money.

So I could quit smoking because of its high cost.

1. So I was able to quit smoking because of its high cost.

Additionaly, I tend to think my health carefully compared to before.

1. Additionally, I tend to think my health improved compared to before.
2. Additionally, I tend to watch my health more carefully than compared to before.

This is also assisting my smoking quit habit.

1. This also assisted me in quitting 
2. my smoking habit.

fter I eat Ramen (Japanese noodle meal), sometimes I feel to smoke again.

1. After I eat Ramen (a Japanese noodle meal),
2. sometimes I feel like smoking again.

However I will not buy cigaletto because it is too expensive to me.

1. However I will not buy cigarettes again 
2. because it is too expensive for me.

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