L237_IES058_What subjects did you study? 【Tambaboon English IELTs Lab Sydney Australia】

* In Japan, 
my educational history is just high school graduation.

Almost Japanese teenagers go to university normaly in Japan.

1. Almost all Japanese teenagers go to university in Japan. 

However, I chose that I did not go to university there.

1. However, 
2. I chose not go to university.

This might means that I am a drop out loser.

1. This might indicate that I am a dropout or loser.

However I do not have any regret, to be honest, because I did not have any interested subjects at that time.

1. However I do not have any regrets, to be honest, 
2. because I did not have any subjects 
3. which I was interested in at that time. 

After I graduate high school, I started to work at an advertising company as a story board illustrater for TV commercial.

1. After I graduated from high school, 
2. I started to work at an advertising company 
3. as a story board illustrator for TV commercials.

The job in there was quite interesting for me.

1. The job there was quite interesting for me.

Then I started to have a strong interest for Mulmedia fields.

1. Then I started to have a strong interest for Multimedia fields.

After I decided to go to Australia, my dream was to study some subject related to multimedia in Australia.

1. When I decided to go to Australia, 
2. my dream was to study some subject 
3. related to multimedia in Australia.

After I studied a basic English at English laguage school, I could enroll to some college to study Diploma of multimedia.

1. After I took a basic English course at an English language school, 
2. I was able to enroll in a college to study for a Diploma in Multimedia.

Then after I completed that subject, I continued to study an advanced diploma of E commerce.

1. Then after I completed that subject, 
2. I continued to study for an advanced diploma in E-commerce. 

Those two qualifications helped me to find IT related jobs in Australia.

1. Those two qualifications helped me 
2. to find IT-related jobs in Australia.

I worked several companies as a IT technical analysts.

1. I worked at several companies as an IT technical analyst.

A year ago, I decided to change my career from IT related field to nursing field.

1. A year ago, 
2. I decided to change my career from IT to nursing.

I have completed Aged care certificate 3 and 4 in Australia already.

1. I have completed my Aged-care Certificate 3 and 4 in Australia already.

I am studying a Diploma of Enrolled Nurse at the moment.

1. I am studying for a Diploma of Enrolled Nurse at the moment.

If I have a chance, money and more English skills, I hope to go to university to study a bachelor of nursing to start to work as a registered nurse.

1. If I have a chance, money and more English skills, 
2. I hope to go to university to get a Bachelor of Nursing degree 
3. so I can start to work as a registered nurse.

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