* You may think that I do not have enough experience about aged care work until now.
However I promise I will work very hard in this nurthing home.
- However, I promise I will work very hard in this nursing home.
I have a strong motivation to work as a aged care worker from now on.
- I have a strong motivation to work as a aged care worker
from now on. - "From now on" suggests that you had been working in a nursing home but were not working with motivation.
- In a cover letter with a resume, you might continue the sentence
- "I have strong motivation to work in this field because..."
- Follow because with your reasons or qualifications.
I will cover my lack of experience by using my motivation.
- I will
covermy lack of experience by using my motivation. - "Cover" suggests "hide."
- A job applicant might say,
- " I will make up for my lack of experience by putting in extra effort."
* I will work hard as much as possible, if you are kind enough to hire me.
For me, my grand fther is a so respected person.
- For me, my grand
ftheris a so respected person. - I respect my grandfather because...
- OR
- To me, grandparents should be respected.
* I really admire him.
He was so great when he was younger age compared to now.
- He was so great when he was younger age compared to now.
- This implies he was really wonderful, but now is not at all.
- The grammar is fine,
- but the implications are not quite what I think you mean.
Now he is old age.
- Now he is old
age.
Then he need someone's help for his dairy life.
- Then he need someone's help for his
dairylife. - Now he needs someone's help for his daily life.
- Dairy is from cows; daily means every day.
* My younger brother is aged care worker in Japan, so he could help him.
* However I did not help that much.
I strongly decided to chnage my career and started to learn aged care subject.
- I strongly decided to change my career and started to learn aged care subject.
I really want to become a good aged care worker, then I hoped to assist old person like my grandfather.
- I really want to become a good aged care worker,
- then I hope
dto assist old person like my grandfather. - Want is present tense, so hope should be in present tense.
This kind of motivation shouldd help my job attitude.
- This kind of motivation should
dhelp my job attitude.
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