L218_IES039_Are you a healthy person? Tambaboon English IELTs Lab Sydney Australia

I think I am a healthy person because now I do not have any specific severe disease fortunately.

1. I think I am a healthy person 
2. because, fortunately, 
3. I do not currently have any specific severe disease.

I like to wake up quite early morning every day related to my job.

1. I like to wake up quite early morning every day 
2. because of my job.

* I wake up around 5 a.m. nearly every day.

I will feel happiness when I see morning sunlight.

* It makes me happy to see morning sunlight.

• ＜It＞「makes」「me」「happy」＜to see morning sunlight＞

It will give me happiness and positive thinking.

1. It gives me happiness and encourages me 
2. to think positively.

• <encourage> [me] <to think> positively

• 【他動-2】（～するように）勧める、奨励する、働きかける、けしかける、仕向ける、促す、
• We encourage you to accept our proposal. 私の提案を受け入れてくださるようお願いします。
• 【他動-3】（発育・発達などを）促す、促進する、助長する、後押しする

I heard when we feel sunlight in the morning, we can produce natural chemical in our brain, which is called "serotonin".

1. I heard 
2. when we feel sunlight in the morning, 
3. our brain produces a natural chemical, called "serotonin".

It will assist for us to feel happiness and to enjoy vigorous health.

1. * This makes us feel happy and improves our health.

I heard it will prevent our depression.

1. I heard it also prevents depression.

Some commercial pharmacy medicine for depression includes artificial serotonin...

1. Some commercial pharmaceutical treatments for depression 
2. includes artificial serotonin...

I am not sure it's true or not..

1. I am not sure if it's true or not..

Also I like to have daily exercise.

1. Also I like to exercise every day.

Every Monday and Thursday I have an abdominal muscle exercise like sit-ups.

1. Every Monday and Thursday 
2. I do an abdominal muscle exercise like sit-ups.

Every Tuesday and Friday I try to build up my muscle of the back.

1. Every Tuesday and Friday 
2. I try to build up the muscles of my back.

• 鍛える　＞　build up

Every Wednesday and Saturday I perform exercise with dumbbells.

1. Every Wednesday and Saturday 
2. I perform exercises with dumbbells.

* Therefore, I can say I am a healthy person.

* Except..

my right arm have a complicated fracture history..

1. I have a complicated fracture history for my right arm.

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