L242_IES063_Do you live with your parents in your own country? 【Tambaboon English IELTs Lab Sydney Australia】

I don't live with parents at the moment.

1. I don't live 
2. with my parents at the moment.

*Now I live in Australia and my parents live in Japan.

1. Until I came to Australia, 
2. I lived with them in Japan.

Therefore, I have never experienced a living by myself alone in Japan.

1. Therefore, 
2. I have never experienced living alone 
3. in Japan. 

After I came to Australia, I have lived by myself alone.

1. Since coming to Australia, 
2. I have lived by myself.

I realised there are good points and bad points.

1. I have come to realise 
2. the advantages and disadvantages of this.

For example of advantage is that I am free.

1.  For example, 
2. an advantage is that I am free.

Nobody direct me anything.

1. Nobody can tell me 
2. what to do.

I can decide everything.

1. I can decide everything for myself. 
2. I can make all my decisions.

The disadvantage of it is no care giver when I am sick.

1. A disadvantage is 
2. that no care giver is there 
3. when I am sick.

Sick alone is so hard and severe.

1. Being sick alone is so hard.

However, I prefer to live alone since no fighting here.

1. However, 
2. I prefer to live alone 
3. since there is no fighting. 

While I live with parents, I had many fighting and corral with them.

1. While I lived with my parents, 
2. I had many fights and quarrels with them.

After I separate with them, I start to feel thanks you mind to them.

1. After I separated from them, 
2. I started to feel thankful for them.

I strongly realised the importance of them.

1. I started to realise 
2. how important they were.

If I don't start to live alone, I could not understand it.

1. If I hadn't started to live alone, 
2. I would never have understood it.

So I often call to them and say thank you for them every time.

1. So I call them often and thank them every time.

I could become mature, modest and glow to adult.

• Not sure what you are trying to say here. 
• Maybe: 

1. I have become more mature and humble 
2. as I've matured as an adult.

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