L071_DJQ036_What motivates you? 【Tambaboon English IELTS JOB INTERVIEW QUESTIONS Sydney Australia】 英語 面接 英会話

I usually try to spend my time as much as useful.

1. I usually try to spend my time as useful as possible.
2. I usually try to spend my time wisely, as much as possible.

• I think this is better. We say 'spend time wisely'.

I tried to do my best.

1. I try to do my best.
2. I tried to do my best.

In my opinion, the time is very important and I hoped use it usefully.

1. In my opinion, the time is very important and I hope to use it efficiently.
2. In my opinion, the time is very important and I hoped to use it wisely. 

The result is not important that much for me.

1. The result is not that much important for me.
2. The result is not that important that much for to me. 

It is important if I spend the time serious, fullfill and doing my best for the goal or purpose.

1. It is important if that I spend my time seriously, fulfillingly 
2. and do my best for a goal or purpose.

1. It is important if I spend the time seriously fullfilling my purpose 
2. and doing my best for the goal or purpose. 

Why I reach this kind of opinion is probably my past experience is related.

1. Why I reach this kind of opinion 
2. is probably related to my past experience.

1. Why I reach have this kind of opinion 
2. is probably because of my past experience.

When I was junior high school student, my frind past away as a athuma disease.

1. When I was a junior high school student, 
2. my friend passed away from a athuma disease. 

• [Don't know what "athuma" is. "Asthma"?]

1. When I was a junior high school student, 
2. my friend past passed away as a result of) Asthma disease. 

* He was 14 years old.


When I work at advertising company in Japan, my senior coworker also past away.

1. When I worked at an advertising company in Japan, 
2. my senior co-worker also passed away.

* He was 39 years old.


Those sad accidents happen too sudden.

1. Those sad incidents happened too suddenly.
2. Those sad accidents happen too suddenly.

Then I realised our life will finish too sudden.

• Then (And, so,--> sounds better) 
• I've(=I have) realized 
• that our life lives (plural)(example: a life, my life, our lives) 
• will (could-->better word because will=definitely, could=probably) 
• finish (end--> better word) 
• too (so--> a better word here, I think.) suddenly.

1. And, so, 
2. I've realized that our lives could end too suddenly.

We should spend our time carefully everytime.

• We should spend our time (Maybe it's better to say: We should live our lives...) 
• carefully every time moment(=better word). 

1. We should live our lives carefully every moment.

These pas experience motivate me everytime.

1. These past experiences motivate me every time.

• I think you should add more thoughts. 
• Example: 

1. Every time I think of these past experiences,
2.  I am motivated to enjoy life every day.

My motivation and opinion are coming these my life experience.

1. My motivation and opinions 
2. are based on my life experience.

1. My motivation and opinions 
2. are coming from my life experiences. 

1. My motivation and opinions 
2. are coming from these life experiences.

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