L226_IES047_Do you want to stay there for a long time? 【Tambaboon English IELTs Lab Sydney Australia】

I don't want to stay current my living place for a long time.

1. I don't want to stay where I'm currently living for a long time.

I like my unit because the rent is not so expensive and
it is 2 bed rooms so space is enough to me.

1. I like my unit because the rent is not so expensive and 
2. it has 2 bed rooms so there's enough space for me.

Yet the suburb is not near city area.

1. Yet the suburb is not near the city area.
2. But it is in a suburb that is not near the city center.

It is quite far from city.

1. It is quite far from the city.
2. In fact, it is quite far from the city

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Also the area do not have train station near my unit.

1. Also the area does not have train station near my unit. 

(Or

1.  "The area where I live doesn't have any train stations close by.")
2. Also, there is no train station near my place.

There is just the transportation of bus only.

1. Riding the bus is the only form of transportation.
2. There is just the bus for transportation only.
3. There is only the bus for transportation.

I really like train because it's punctual compared to bus.

1. I really like trains because they are punctual compared to bus.
2. I really like trains because they are punctual compared to the bus.

Then, it is not affected traffic jam of roads.

1. They are not affected by traffic jams on roads either.

In addition, its seats are quite big and comfortable.

1. In addition, the seats are quite big and comfortable.

However seats of bus is small, tight.
However the seats on the bus are small and tight.




Sometimes inside of bus is so crowded as well.

1. Sometimes the inside of the bus gets so crowded as well.

If there is car accidents, estimated arrival time to destination is to extended.

1. If there is a car accident, the estimated arrival time to the destination is to extended.
2. If there is an accident, the bus is delayed

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In Australia, sometimes the bus timetable does not have meanings.
In Australia, sometimes the bus timetable does not have any meaning whatsoever.




I mean the bus come earlier time in timetable then they do not wait exact departure time or I have to wait more than 10 minutes from the estimated arrival time on bus stop.

1. I mean the bus may come earlier than the time listed in the timetable and it may not wait until the exact departure time or I have to wait more than 10 minutes from the estimated arrival time listed on the chart.

Therefore, the bus time is unstable and inpanctual.

1. Therefore, the bus time is unstable and unpredictable.

As a result my current living place is not comfortable related to transportation.

1. As a result the place I currently live in is not comfortable when it comes to transportation.

As a result my current living place is not comfortable when it comes to transportation.

1. As a result my current living place is not convenient when it comes to transportation.

Therefore, I would like to move somewhere else easy to access to city.

1. Therefore, I would like to move somewhere else with easy to access to the city.

Or I need to buy expensive car...

1. That, or I could buy an expensive car...
2. That, or I need to buy an expensive car...
3. Or else I need to buy an expensive car...

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