Monday, 4 March 2013

L125_IES015_What clothes do you like? 【Tambaboon English IELTs Lab Sydney Australia】



* Clothes aren't only used to keep us warm.

    1. It has They have become an important part of modern civilization.
      Different nations have different styles clothes.
      1. Different nations have different styles of clothing.
        And different styles clothes represent different cultures.
        1. And different styles clothes represent different cultures.
          * All people want their life 
          to be filled with variety, color and comfort by wearing clothes.
            We will have a good mood when we wear beautiful clothes.
            1. We You will have be in a good mood when you we wear beautiful clothes. 

            • *WE is not the right word choice, you could use ONE or YOU instead. 
            • Also, you can't have a mood because a mood is a state of being, 
            • so you either ARE in a good mood, or WERE, or WILL BE.
              * I like leisure clothes very much.
                Because it is not only cheap but also convenient to wear.
                1. Because it is they are not only cheap, but also convenient to wear.

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