L138_IES027_If you were the head of your government, what would you be the biggest problem facing you at the moment? 【Tambaboon English IELTs Lab Sydney Australia】

If you were the head of your government, 
what would you be the biggest problem facing you at the moment?

• English grammatical rule: IF clause
• English grammatical rule: would

I think one of the problem in Australia is public transportation system related issue.

1. I think 
2. one of the problems in Australia is 
3. an issue 
4. related to the public transportation system related issue.

In my opinion, other government policies in Australia for education, welfare, economy, politics, national security are better than Japan's one.

1. In my opinion, 
2. other government policies in Australia for 
3. concerning education, welfare, economy, politics, and national security 
4. are better than Japan's one.

• Or, 
• you could say "better than those of Japan"

However public transportation system in Australia is not satisfied level for me.

1. However, 
2. the public transportation system in Australia 
3. is not 
4. satisfying　/　at a level that satisfies me 
5. satisfied level for me. 

• *You must put a comma after 'However' 
• when it is at the beginning of a sentence, 
• except when you are saying something like 
• "However much" or 
• "However long" or 
• "However hard/easy",
•  because then however is modifying the word it precedes.

I hope to change and improve it better.

1. I hope to change and improve it for the better.

We should increase more train and buses frequency.

1. We should increase more 
2. the train and buses frequency. 

• When you are increasing something, you are making it "more" 
• so you don't need to say more, too.

Then they should come to on time on bus stops and train station.

1. Then they should come to arrive on time on 
2. to bus stops and train stations.

They should be more punctual.


However, in Christmas season, I took on bus one day in Australia.

1. However, in the Christmas season, 
2. I took on a bus one day in Australia.

At that time, I found inside of the bus is decorated to many pictures which are drawn by kids and neon lights.

1. At that time, 
2. I found the inside of the bus is was decorated 
3. to with many pictures 
4. which are drawn by kids,
5. and neon lights. 

• You need a comma ( , ) after kids, 
• unless you mean both the kids and the lights drew the pictures

It makes me happy and this kind of festival event mind services are not found in Japan.

1. It makes me happy and this kind of festival event mind services 
2. are not found in Japan. 

• I'm not entirely sure what you mean here...but I think I'm confused because I don't understand the event you are describing

So I like this kind of aspects of Australian public transportation service.

We can honor and enhance this kind of aspects more.

1. We can honor and enhance this these kinds of aspects more.

It is great culture.

1. It is a great culture.

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