* The reason is
my grandparents become very old age now.
- my grandparents have become very old
age now.
They helped me a lot when I was a young.
- They helped me a lot
- when I was
ayoung.
I strongly would like to help and assist them.
- I feel strongly
- about helping and assisting them.
My little brother is a aged care worker in Japan.
- My little brother is an aged care worker in Japan.
He has a knowledge, skills and experience about aged care.
- He has
aknowledge, skills and experience - concerning aged care.
* Therefore, he can help our grandparents but I do not do that much right now.
I hope to start to work as aged care worker and to get knowledge, skills and experience.
- I hope to start to work as aged care worker and
- to get that same kind of knowledge, skills and experience.
* I would like to become like my little brother to help my parents and grandparents.
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